Friday, November 27, 2020

Medusa

 Hey! Here's that story I promised from Pandora. Please let me know what you think!

Medusa

The day I was born, I killed three people. Not purposefully, of course, but the guilt is still mine.

The midwife was first, a woman who was too plain to catch a husband when she was younger, so she turned to the secrets of childbirth, helping many of the women before her death. She screamed when she saw me, when my eyes opened, and turned to stone.

My father was next, prying me from her cold hands, looking for himself what could be so horrifying. The nest of snakes that was my hair hissed at him, and he was next.

Finally, my grandmother, my mother's mother. She proclaimed me cursed and took me from my father's arms, intending to kill me there and then. But she met my eyes, and she too was petrified. 

Mother wrapped me in a blanket, head and all, and tucked me in a basket. She was weak, but knew what she had to do to save my life. I looked like nothing more than a pile of laundry, as long as I stayed quiet.

We escaped the village, and then she began to run, as fast and far away as she could go. She told me of hearing pursuit and running faster, or hiding in brambles. All the while, I stayed silent and still. Often she wondered if I was dead, suffocated, but then a snake would hiss, or I would coo.

Finally, she came to the temple, where she knew I would be safe. It was abandoned, and too far from the path for anyone to ever find me.

I had a good childhood, even though I had to cover my eyes, in order to keep my mother safe.   It was a sacrifice I was willing to make.

She told me stories, stories of her life in the village, of growing up, of the father I never would know, and of the day I'd been born. I had no friends, no playmates, so she was the only person I ever knew. Mother taught me that I was to hide, that I would be murdered if anyone ever saw me. My snakes told me the same.

I was always able to understand them, even when I was young. It nearly gave Mother a heart attack when the first sound I truly made was a hiss.

Of course, all good things must come to an end, and my childhood was no exception. 

I couldn't see her, but I could hear her cough and wheeze, my snakes telling me that she was thinner and thinner, eating less and less. Even though she denied it, I knew she was dying.

Eventually, she agreed. "We have to go to the village," she whispered, her skeletal hand clutching mine. "They have medicine there. Someone will be able to help."

I agreed. Mother couldn't die. 

First, though, there was the matter of concealing my differences. The blindfold would have to stay on, my snakes could direct me. I preferred it that way, anyway. The only time I ever took it off was when I was completely alone, bathing, or preparing food. I'd learned to floor plan to the temple ages ago. However, the outside world was a mystery.

Mother talked me through making a hood that would cover my hair, using the remains of the clothes she had been wearing when we ran. It worked, as long as my snakes kept quiet. But that meant I was essentially blind.

The journey back through the forest was filled with the sounds of me yelping as branches whipped across my face, my snakes hissing, and Mother groaning and coughing. She had one arm around my shoulders, to help her walk. That did meant that if I fell, she would too, so I had to be extra careful. It took hours.

I sensed when we reached the edge of the forest because it there was suddenly a breeze on the exposed parts of my face. Mother stood a little straighter, and my snakes went silent.

"Hello!" Someone called, making me jump a little.

"Answer him, Medusa," Mother said. I was named for my grandmother, the woman I'd killed the day I was born.

"We need help!" I called back.

Then Mother's weight was lifted from my shoulders. "Let me take her. We'll get you to a healer, ma'am."

"Thank you," Mother whispered. "Tell me, what is your name?"

"My name is Nikos. What about you?"

"I am Amalthaea, and my daughter is named Medusa."

"It is nice to meet you both," he said. "The healer is not far. Can you make it?"

Mother answered, but it was too quietly for me to hear.

"We'll just take our time, then. Keeping up, Medusa?"

I was a few steps behind, careful to follow the sound of them talking. "I'm here," I replied.

"If you don't mind me asking, where did you live? There's nothing on the other side of the forest, nothing but impassable mountains."

"We're nomads," I replied quickly. "We've been in that forest almost a year, ever since Mother got sick."

"Nomads, you say?" Nikos sounded thoughtful.

"Our clan was wiped out," Mother told him. "We were the only two to escape the massacre."

Nikos walked in silence for a long while, then said, "Here's the healer's hut. She's one of the best this side of the mountains."

"Thank you," I said, "I can help my mother from here."

"No, I insist. Let me help you."

Without giving me a chance to argue further, he opened the door and went inside.


To be continued.....


Looks like I caught Pandora off guard! She's promised that she will have the rest done by next week. This will also become her first novel (a fleshed out version, obviously).

Thanks for reading this far, and see you next week!

Thursday, November 26, 2020

Writing tip # 11 - Writing is HARD

 Hey! Time for another writing tip. This one isn't really a tip, as they go, but it is a fact. Writing is HARD.

Most people have this stereotypical idea of writers, that they live lives behind their computers, only rarely coming out to accept writing awards and things like that. Mostly because that's what the movies portray.  If you don't have this idea, you have probably tried writing a book at some point, with a serious eye to publishing.

Writing is not sunshine and roses. Often, writers live and die without getting any kind of major recognition while they live, sometimes never getting it. 

A writer is the ultimate chameleon. They have to understand what goes on in the head of a 30 year old investment banker, at the same time as knowing what a six year old girl would be thinking. And it has to be portrayed in a convincing way. A writer has to be able to envision people they'll never meet and describe them accurately to a reader.

A writer also has to know a lot about the world they're writing in. Small details need to be hashed out, because you could be missing a major plot hole somewhere if you don't explain how your main character came to know some obscure bit of information. This doesn't mean you should know every detail, though, because then you'll spend the entire time world building and never get to write.

A writer also has to know things about the character that will never reach the page, but could influence the person's actions. A good example of this being explained is actually in a novel, Brandon Sanderson's The Emperor's Soul.

Beyond the technical hardness, there's also the need to actually sit down and write while ignoring distractions. Like now, for example. I'm writing this blog post instead of working on my next book. 

Writing has lots of background work that no one sees. However, this doesn't mean you shouldn't write. If you are a writer, you will want to keep writing in spite of everything I've just told you, in spite of the difficulty. If what I've said makes you shake your head, maybe consider a different outlet for your creativity.



Thanks! Don't forget to check back tomorrow for Pandora's take on the legend of Medusa.

Friday, November 20, 2020

Not going easy

Hey!!! It's me again. I managed to wrangle something out of Jack Glisson this week, so I've got a sci-fi story for you. He wrote off a prompt that he found a while ago. However, I couldn't find the original creator of the image, so I can't post it. Anyway, here's Jack's first ever published work (yes, this counts).

Not Going Easy
She crouched behind the tree, feeling hot blood drip to the ground. Her hunters were not far enough away. It was over. Amala knew that she was about to die.
Not yet, she thought. They wouldn't get her without a fight.
The robots weren't technically built for the swamp, but that didn't matter. Even if it managed to stop them, they could have reinforcements in a matter of minutes. 
Hands shaking, she reached into her small mechanic's pouch, hunting through her tools for something useful.
Everything she had was technically useful, just not in her current situation. Each one of her tools was as familiar as her own fingers, as familiar as each breath she took. 
Smiling a little, she touched each one, her fear momentarily forgotten as she was lost in the memories. The wrench set she'd been given by her father on her fifth birthday, the special tool that could open any lock that she'd saved for years to buy new. All scrappers had a similar toolset, though hers were the nicest.
Tucked into the side pocket was a small photo, the last thing she had from her mother. Her mother had never taken to space. Father had said some people couldn't handle travel over lightyears. Made them sick, or something.
Amala  touched the frayed piece of paper, feeling the softness of the many times the sheet had been crumpled and flattened. Nothing stayed in good condition in a scrapper's pouch.
She stared at the image, a simple landscape. There'd always been a plan to visit Earth, maybe find her mother. Course, after her father died, that plan had become nothing but a dream. Something about Earth called her, though. Rumour said that all humans felt it, that it was an inherent tie to their home planet.
The robots started splashing closer, their lights cutting through the gloom. Amala shifted, biting back a groan of pain as her wounded leg took her weight, for a split second.
Something occurred to her then, an idea that could save some scrappers from these robots, if not herself. She pulled out her lock opener, unscrewing the back. The battery glowed with a dim light, showing her just how bad her leg wound was. That wasn't something she wanted to think about.
Taking a screwdriver, she pried open the protective casing, which was no easy task. The photon batteries were not meant to be opened, other than in a very controlled and professional environment. Obviously, that was to keep regular idiots from accessing the core, as Amala was about to do.
Staring at the glass tube containing the compressed molecules, she couldn't believe what she was about to do. The red glow made it seem as though her entire body was covered with blood. 
Blood was mixing with the stagnant water under her knees, enough that she was feeling lightheaded. 
Rising slightly, she broke a piece of bark off the tree stump. The crack echoed around her and the robots stopped. A peek around the tree told her that they were facing in her direction. 
She set the core on a flat rock, her palm on top of it. Then she threw the piece of bark against the top of the tree, making it rattle. The robots would have no question of where she was.
A deep breath was all she had time for before the first was around the tree.
"Amala Harri! You are under arrest for illegally modifying your escort."
She scowled up at it. "I put eyeballs on it. Named it. Gave it an identity. And you tore him apart."
"The truce of 3847 decreed that unauthorized modification of an escort is punishable with life in the salt mines if Kara."
"No, you'll not take me to some salt mine."
Amala leaned on her right hand, the one that rested on the core. The thin glass cracked, cutting into her hand. Then the world exploded. 

The end.



Thanks for reading, and have a good week. Next time it'll be a take on Medusa's legend, from the mind of Pandora Jarvis, another of my Scribbler associates. 

Thursday, November 12, 2020

Sneak peek

 All right. Today I have something special for you guys. My friend Alice Salvage (you've already seen one of her stories) has a story, but she needs some feedback on it. She's given me the first chapter to post and hopefully get thoughts and critique. We also do this amongst ourselves (meaning the Scribblers) but it's helpful to get outside thoughts as well. Without further ado, 

Dragon 

Chapter 1

I ran through the halls of the abbey, my heart pounding, my bare feet cold on the smooth marble. My breath came is short, sharp gasps.

The creature behind me ran silently, though I knew he was there. He darted from shadow to shadow, the chase more a game to him. Dragons loved to play with their prey.

When I glanced over my shoulder, his forest green eyes glowed. They were all I could make out in the darkness, though imagination and rumor filled in the rest of his majestic body. Even terrified as I was, I couldn't deny the inherent beauty of the Iridescent dragon. 

That moment caused me to lose my step on the slick floor, falling heavily onto my right shoulder. 

"Please, Prince Scalar," I cried out, pushing myself away as the dragon came closer. "Please don't hurt me."

"Princess, wake up! Please, Princess."

I sat bolt upright, my chest heaving in fear. "It was him, Kata," I whispered, shaking. "The prince. He was there again."

"It's all right, Princess. He's not here. Prince Scalar is in Solaria. I assume you won't be sleeping again tonight?"

"No. If anyone asks for me, I will be on the west wall." 

"Would you like me to accompany you?"

"No, Kata. Get some sleep. Maybe have a tray with tea sent up at dawn."

"Of course, milady. I will prepare it myself." She tried to hide a yawn, and I smiled.

"Get some rest."

"Of course, milady." 

I noticed how she waited until the door closed behind me before moving.

All my dresses, and even my nightgowns, had long sleeves, but I still tugged on the left one before making my way down the hall toward the set of stairs that led to the wall. 

Two guards fell into step behind me. "Please not today, Kyler," I said, speaking to the one who was always on my right.

"Milady, I have orders directly from the Regent. We will be with you, but we'll remain at a distance. Is that acceptable?"

I nodded, too tired to argue. Too often, my sleep was disturbed by the same nightmare. This exchange had almost become habit. 

On the wall, I walked out to the center, enjoying the fresh sea breeze. Ever since coming to the abbey, this had been my favorite place.  Many of the nuns were afraid of the sea, and they were all too busy with their tasks.

I enjoyed it most now, when the entire abbey was asleep, save for me and my guards.

The nuns would be up with the sun, saying their prayers to Aarush, the king of the dragons. Once that was finished, they'd go about their daily tasks, sewing, gardening, cleaning and cooking, each according to her talents. 

Closing my eyes, I allowed my mind to drift, though not too far. If I gave myself the freedom, all I would think about was the day that my life changed.

Not for the first time, I wondered why Prince Scalar was the dragon I saw. He hadn't even been there that day, though no one believed me on that count. Mathis said that it was because I'd wake in the night, screaming about green dragons and horror. Father's generals, acting as a ruling council until Mathis was old enough to take over as regent, had taken that as enough proof to go to war, the same war we'd been fighting for ten years. They'd started a war that had claimed thousands of lives from both sides based on the nightmares of a girl who'd had horrors come to life.

Despite all my efforts not to, my thoughts circled back to the event, the single most defining day of my life. I hardly noticed when the sun rose, turning the spray of the waves crashing against the cliff rose and gold hues. Normally, that transformation from mundane water to thousands of jewels being launched into the air was what I came to the walls to see, but I stayed locked in my memories.

"Princess." The Abbess's quiet voice behind me was what finally broke the spell of the past. She was standing behind me, holding a tray with tea and bright yellow sunberries. Her enormous dog, Kaspar, stood by her side, a position he rarely left. "What were you thinking about?" A nod of her head, and my guards carried two chairs and a small table, setting them where we could see over the low safety railing.

"Not much," I replied, taking a seat.

"Don't lie to me, Lia. I've talked with you almost every morning for ten years. I can tell when you aren't telling me the whole truth." She handed me a small cup with fragrant tea. 

I wrapped my hands around it, letting the warmth sink into me and drive away the dark thoughts that came with the night. "The nightmare again."

"With the dragon?"

"Yes," my voice was barely audible, even in my own ears. "Though my dragon never appeared."

"Small mercies, at least."

We sat in silence for several minutes as I tried to frame my next question. "Mother Abbess," I finally began, looking into her face. At first, I'd been scared of her, especially because of her left eye, which had been torn out in some accident she never shared. Of course, she wore an eye patch, and gradually her jokes about being a pirate forced to masquerade as the head nun won me over.

"What, Lia?" 

"Why do I always see Prince Scalar? Why is he the one chasing me in my dreams, and not my parents' killer?"

"The mind is a strange and wondrous thing, Princess. Our dreams are a mix of our thoughts, fears and wishes. You fear Prince Scalar, so he is the one you see."

"But, Mother..."

She shook her head. "I will argue about the significance of dreams with you some other time, Lia. For now, I have news from your brother."

"Mathis?" I felt my heart sink. My brother only ever wrote me when he wanted to convince me to return to the palace. I always refused.

"Yes. Apparently, he's managed to catch his prize, the prince of Solaria."

"Prince Denyl?"

"No, Lia. Prince Scalar. The regent wants you to be present when he passes judgement."

"Tell him I'm not going."

She looked sympathetic for a moment, then hardened. "Princess, you cannot stay here. Not any longer."

I could only gape at her, unable to find my words.

"This abbey is meant to be a place of healing, not a place to hide from your fears. I've allowed you to stay this long because you were not ready, but I now believe that I've helped you as much as I can. Until you face your fears, you'll never know if you can conquer them."

"Mother Abbess," I whispered. "Please. Don't throw me out."

"It's for your own good, Princess. You have duties that you must assume. You've been of age to rule for three years now, and have made no move to claim the throne from your brother. It's time for you to reappear to our people, and another opportunity like this one will not come for a while. You need to return."

Now I nodded, though tears streamed down my face. She was right. I had to return to the palace so I could face the demons that haunted my nightmares.





That's the end of Chapter 1! Thanks for reading all the way to here, and please leave a comment so that Alice can improve the story. Please keep in mind that this is a second draft, so there are likely to be rather minor spelling and grammar mistakes.

Next week I'll be posting a chapter from one of Jack Glisson's stories (another Scribbler). If you're into sci-fi, it's definitely worth checking out!

Thanks and have a good week!

Thursday, November 5, 2020

Writing tip #10 - Set goals

 This might seem a little self-explanatory, but it really isn't. Many people don't realize that writing a book is HARD. Distractions are everywhere we turn, from Pinterest 'research' to the feeling of 'I just don't want to write today.'

Don't worry, though, because there is a solution, a remarkably simple one. Set goals. This can be to write a certain amount of words, a certain amount of pages, or even chapters. I currently write about 1000 words a day (though I write more if I'm on a roll), and at first I had to leave my phone upstairs, just to keep from being distracted, because, like all teens, I simply couldn't ignore the buzz that meant someone wanted to talk to me. Now, though, I find it much easier. 

If you set goals for your writing, it can be quite fulfilling to reach the goal each day, and even push yourself to reach higher goals. Writing can be something that you fit into the small parts of your day that aren't reserved for something else. 

Even just five hundred words is a good word goal, especially if you consider that 500 words is about a page. Four or five typed pages make a chapter, and 12 or so chapters make a book. It would take a bit longer, but you will end up with a finished first draft.

Obviously, there will be days when you dont meet your goals, and that's all right. Just accept it, and move on, writing for the next day. As I've said before, if writing becomes a chore, take a break. Unless you're actually on a schedule, don't hold yourself to dates you can't reach. You'll just burn out.

Thoughts and a story

 Good news, I am writing again some.  Bad news, I recently got a diagnosis for my mental health that is a bit concerning and means that I am...